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Consider the colon in bold, which is used to connect two sentences If it is not the best choice, replace it with a different punctuation mark. i Carousels were hugely popular amusement park attractions during the late nineteenth and early twentieth centuries : however, the onset of the Great Depression forced many of them to shut down.

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Consider the colon in bold, which is used to connect two sentences If it is not the best
choice, replace it with a different punctuation mark.
i
Carousels were hugely popular amusement park attractions during the late
nineteenth and early twentieth centuries : however, the onset of the Great
Depression forced many of them to shut down.

Consider the colon in bold, which is used to connect two sentences If it is not the best choice, replace it with a different punctuation mark. i Carousels were hugely popular amusement park attractions during the late nineteenth and early twentieth centuries : however, the onset of the Great Depression forced many of them to shut down.

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The colon in the sentence is not the best choice because it is used to introduce a list, explanation, or elaboration, but here it connects two independent clauses. A semicolon would be more appropriate to connect these closely related independent clauses. Here is the revised sentence:<br /><br />Carousels were hugely popular amusement park attractions during the late nineteenth and early twentieth centuries; however, the onset of the Great Depression forced many of them to shut down.
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