Read the selection and choose the best answer to each question. Emma wrote this story about a girl and her new coworker. Read Emma's story and look for revisions she needs to make. Then answer the questions that follow. Sawyer's New Coworker (1) Sawyer smiled as she surveyed her surroundings.(2) She loved her new job and thought it was fun (3) Wheeling a flat cart of canned goods through Alsle 6, she was enjoying the quiet environment and the complete solitude (4) She was poised to place o can of tomato sauce on its designated shelf when a roucous voice from behind startled her. (5) This caused her to shriek and toss the can over her shoulder. (6) The can dented as it hit the floor, a tiny stream of tomato juice escaping from its side. (7) The echo from an annoyingly loud laugh ricocheted through the aisle.and Sawyer quickly spun around, immediately recognizing a classmate of her older brother's. (8) "Hey, sorry if I scared you," he said with a grin. (9)"My name is Carlos.and my uncle's the manager of the store. (10) He figured I could use a job." (11) Leaning in toward Sawyer, he then whispered that he'd applied for the lifeguard position at the community pool but it (12) Sawyer's eyes narrowed. (13) She knew enough about Carlos from observing his Do 9. Which sentence can replace sentence 2 to help develop the introduction to this story? Do grocery store. She had landed the perfect job, stocking shelves at a local She was glad she had found a job that allowed her to make A it to swim team in the evenings. She was a little chilly, so she was quite thankful that she Do had worn a jacket.

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Read the selection and choose the best answer to each question. Emma wrote this story about a girl and her new coworker. Read Emma's story and look for revisions she needs to make. Then answer the questions that follow. Sawyer's New Coworker (1) Sawyer smiled as she surveyed her surroundings.(2) She loved her new job and thought it was fun (3) Wheeling a flat cart of canned goods through Alsle 6, she was enjoying the quiet environment and the complete solitude (4) She was poised to place o can of tomato sauce on its designated shelf when a roucous voice from behind startled her. (5) This caused her to shriek and toss the can over her shoulder. (6) The can dented as it hit the floor, a tiny stream of tomato juice escaping from its side. (7) The echo from an annoyingly loud laugh ricocheted through the aisle.and Sawyer quickly spun around, immediately recognizing a classmate of her older brother's. (8) "Hey, sorry if I scared you," he said with a grin. (9)"My name is Carlos.and my uncle's the manager of the store. (10) He figured I could use a job." (11) Leaning in toward Sawyer, he then whispered that he'd applied for the lifeguard position at the community pool but it (12) Sawyer's eyes narrowed. (13) She knew enough about Carlos from observing his Do 9. Which sentence can replace sentence 2 to help develop the introduction to this story? Do grocery store. She had landed the perfect job, stocking shelves at a local She was glad she had found a job that allowed her to make A it to swim team in the evenings. She was a little chilly, so she was quite thankful that she Do had worn a jacket.

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## Step 1 The problem is asking us to replace sentence 2 in the story with a sentence that better develops the introduction. Sentence 2 is: "She loved her new job and thought it was fun". We need to choose an option that provides more context and detail to the story. ## Step 2 Let's evaluate each option: ### Option A: "She had landed the perfect job, stocking shelves at a local grocery store." This sentence provides more detail about Sawyer's job, which is stocking shelves at a local grocery store. This sentence gives the reader a clearer picture of what Sawyer is doing and where she is. ### Option B: "She was glad she had found a job that allowed her to make it to swim team in the evenings." This sentence introduces a new element, Sawyer's swim team, which was not mentioned in the original sentence 2. This could confuse the reader as it introduces a new aspect of the story. ### Option C: "She was a little chilly, so she was quite thankful that she had worn a jacket." This sentence is irrelevant to the story as it talks about Sawyer's clothing, which is not important to the story. ## Step 3 Based on the evaluation, option A is the best choice as it provides more detail and context to the story, which helps to develop the introduction.

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